The chart depicts the proportion of elderly people in the US who spent their free time from 1980 to 2010 into five different types of activities. In general, senior citizens of the US have increased their investment of time to various activities except going to theatre in the given period.
To be specific, hiking became
the most famous (수치가 높은 것과 유명한 것을 동일시할 수 없습니다.) activity in 2010 with a figure of 80% of figure after a steady growing tendency
from the 1980s. Likewise, surfing the internet (인터넷은 고유명사이므로, 대문자 시작입니다.) also experienced constant increase
in its figure from 5% in 1980 to 50% in 2010 which is ten times bigger than that of figure
than 1980.
Proportion of watching TV
which was the largest in 1980 with 60% reached its peak at 2000 with 70% (percentage point 가 쓰일 상황은 전혀 아닙니다. 또한, 60 percentage 역시 잘못된 표현이고요.) 60 percentage point reached its peak at 2000
with 70 percentage figure and slightly decreased to the figure of 65% as the
second famous free time activity after hiking in 2010. The statistics regarding
elderly people who enjoyed reading also became double from 30% to 60% after
some fluctuations in the given period. Meanwhile, the proportion of senior
citizens went to movie decreased from the figure of (이런 거 굳이 안 써도 됩니다. 써도 상관은 없지만요) 50% to the figure of 45%
making it as the least loved (이것도 엄밀히 따지자면 써서는 안 되긴 하지만, 그래도 위의 '유명' 보다는 차라리 낫습니다.) free time activity among five given types of
activities in 2010.
총평: (6/7/6/7) 6.5
의아하게 이번 글에서는 단위 표현이 꽤 망가졌는데, 원래는 잘 해오시던만큼 일시적인 현상으로 보겠습니다. percent 와 percentage 의 차이도 꼭 구분해주시고, 전반적인 어휘 사용에 있어서도 주의해주세요~수고하셨습니다 :)