Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people consider that the choice of young people will lead to the selfish, whereas other people rather reckon that children should know the way of proper decisions by making its themselves. Both views will be discussed but I think, the latter view is more persuasive.
To begin with, there are some people who think like the former view that it is disadvantageous to decide children themselves. This is mainly because of the characteristic of human. As early as, population have a prominent feature which more concentrate on by themselves than others. It originate from the instinct of survive but if it exceed, it is easy to counterproductivity. In addition, the innate tendency especially connect with needs is likely to linger. The young generation would be more individualism and worsen competition in future society.
Notwithstanding, giving some option to young people has a positive impact to them. It have been observed some people who suffering from choose something themselves or coin a new word that call them. It means, the lack of choice about their diet, clothing even trivial things have been going on sine young. Perhaps, this trend would be continuous unless they are exposed the situations which should opt by their parents or some adults. Because a good number of parents do not give it due to their age or protection. Through it, children able to lean how to make a decision and what the results from choice drive effect and so on.
In conclusion, although excessive and prejudiced choice drive to people who more think their convenience or benefit, spontaneous option make young children to be people who consider between themselves and other or all cicumstances.
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