Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, the a wide range of people are cultivating other languages. The argument about this objectives happens more and more. Some people say that the target on learning languages of various countries is only to work and travel smoothly. There are different Different opinions will be shown before presenting my view.
The advocates for the view say that individuals speak foreign languages when they are exposed to the languages and this occasions include (포함이 아닌, 유일함이 되어야합니다.)working and travelling. If people visit to bookstores, they can see a lot of books related to languages which introduce how to speak well at the workplace and travelling place. This shows the obvious reasons that why they cultivate languages. Additionally, humans live to enjoy pleasure and they act by the need of something. They earn money to obtain costs they accomplish what they want and this money is mainly used by going journey. (여행의 필요성에 대해 너무 과하게 들어가긴 했지만, 6~7점 선에서는 크게 중요치 않습니다.)
Another opinions is that language becomes an important factor for social relationship and communication. As the modern society is globalized, individuals learn foreign language to communicate with various people. Due to the increase of this case, the number of learners is growing up as their hobby through YouTube Youtube and simple meeting. Moreover, Studying studying language improves individual's thoughts and lifestyles. This is because they experience other cultures, through reading foreign books and watching foreign movies. Therefore, people may employ other languages to upgrade themselves.
In conclusion, I can assume that the objectives about cultivating languages is not limited to work and travel. This is because language has many advantages and can be used as different ways such as communication and improvement of themselves.
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잘 써주신 편인데, 문법의 경우가 유일한 6점이었습니다. 예전처럼 근본적인 문제가 있는 건 아니지만, 자잘한 오류가 꽤 많이 보이고 이게 누적되면서 감점으로 이어졌네요. task 2에서 최대한 점수를 벌어갈 수 있어야하니까, 이런 사항들에도 신경써주세요! 수고하셨습니다 :)