For the past year have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue you membership. Write a letter to the club xecretary. In your letter
- State what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
- Give details of how you have benefited from the club
- Explain why you want to leave
- You do not need to write your own address
Hello, (내가 누군지부터 서술하고 가야합니다.) I have been a member of your sports and social club for the past three years. The reason why I am writting to you is because I can not longer maintain my membership any longer. It was a good experience for me, because I had the oppotunity to exercise and make a lot of conversation with the club members.
Unforturately, I will go abroad college for my study and future to study for 4 years from in next month. So I can not keep being a member anymore. If I come back, I hope to go back to the club.
Currently, my membership is student membership, and I have a year left. I want to get a refund to my bank account for the cost with already paid.
I will let you know my account number when you cheak my mail and reply. In the meantime, I thank you for allowing me the use the club conveniently. And I wish your club good luck in the future.
총평: (5/5/6/6) 5.5
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