Artificial intelligence is very common nowadays. Some people welcome this new technology and expect it will help people a lot. However, others are reluctant about it, because they believe AI will give some negative impacts on human beings. It is arguable, but I agree with the latter more.
For sure, AI s, lives more convenient. People can reduce their working time because people's work instead.
On the other hand, AI can be dangerous because we are not sure the human human beings can control AI or not in the future. Its power is getting bigger, and people are already using them in many fields every day. Due to advance of technology, people can already see the AI that makes and develops other AI by itself without the humans' helps. Even
In conclusion, AI can make people's lives
총평: 일단 논제가 생략되서 점수는 뺐습니다. 어차피 제 점수가 중요한 것도 아니고요~
약~~간씩의 내용 보충이 들어가면 좋은데, 가령 본론 첫 번째 문단의 후반부는 It can make people comfortable, because there would be no need to keep their eyes on the road ~ 이와 같이 더 세세하게 작성해주시면 근거 전개에 도움이 됩니다.
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