1. 6.0 목표
2. 2/22 시험
4. 35분 소요..
5. WR 성적이 힘들것같아 추가로 3월초에 추가로 시험볼 예정입니다.
<주제>
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that itis better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
<작성한 Essay>
It is a common belief that people are better to admit the circumstances which are bad such as dissatisfaction of job or tight budget. However, there is a more persuasive argument that it is better to give a shot and move on to something when they are in a bad situation, not just rationalizing all the problems.
On the one hand, it is true that agreeing on what is happening to us and not going forward feels stable when they (파란색 둘 간 인칭 통일이 되어야합니다.) live life. With a stable circumstance, people can develop soft skills abilities in the company like social skills, which helps people be accustomed to something very fast. In addition, people can reduce stress they get from work. Those people will not have a fight, not only with other colleagues, but also with oneself because they already admit the status.
Nevertheless, I support the idea that trying something new and enhancing oneself in such situations are better for them. First, people who give a new shot are considered hopeful and always can have a positive mind to everything when they need to overcome barriers. Moreover, those people will earn more money. With a positive way to think, people keep trying to find a better way to survive for their livings. Then, they get a chance to learn more deeply, which leads them to get a higher-income job. In fact, in a recent study conducted in South-Korea, it was revealed that people with positive mind to think who have studied enormously have high-income jobs than the people with negative mind. (앞에서 했던 말을 대한민국만 붙여서 그대로 반복하는 것에 지나지 않지만, 사실 6.0에는 전혀 상관이 없기 때문에 저도 따로 말씀드리지는 않겠습니다.)
To sum up, while it is apparent that people who are unsatisfied with their jobs and have low-income will achieve bright and peaceful lives because they are free from stresses. Nevertheless, it is undeniable that making improvements and developing their potential abilities is much better for people by having higher salaries and positive ways to think.
총평: (7/6/7/6) 6.5
라이팅 성적이 힘들 것 같다고 하셨는데 저는 아무리 봐도 6.0 밑으로 떨어지는 각이 보이지 않습니다. 물론 현재 글이 6.5이긴 하나, task 1에서의 감점을 고려하면 6.0이 현실적이기는 할 거에요. 그러나 여하튼 WRGG님 영어 실력은 충분히 좋으시니까, 오프토픽이나 미완성 등의 문제만 아니면 6.0은 무조건 받으시므로, 자신감 갖고 시험 치르셔도 됩니다! 지금 글도 '이게 틀렸다!' 라고 할 수 있는 부분은 거의 없었어요. 수고하셨습니다 :)