This chart presents the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewed movie genres in 1995, 2000, and 2005 relatively.
Overall, it is clear that most profit was made from drama in 1995 and comedy in 2005. (2000년만 왕따시키면 안 됩니다.) Whereas, musicals and animation showed the lowest proporttion of profits.
To begin with, it is evident that drama made the highest profits of about 28% in 1995 but then dropped dramatically in the order of 15% in 2005. Comedy, which had made second highest profits of 20% in 1995 showed an opposite trend compared to drama as it significantly increased until about 27% in 2005.
Furthermore In contrast, it is clearly seen that there are unpopular genres such as musicals and animation which had made the lowest profits compared to other genres. However, the proportion of profits made from animation gradually increased about 3% (여기는 퍼센트포인트로 표현해주셔야 합니다. 이에 대해서는 총평에서 링크를 드릴게요.) in between 1995 and 2005. Whereas, the profits of musical was increased significantly and peaked at 9% in 2000 but then considerably dropped and levelled of at 3% in 2005.
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