Some people think that providing many TV channels is a great thing, but others think that this may affect the quality of TV programs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion,
It is true that the number of TV channels
is increasing. There are some people arguing that this increase the increasing makes the
quality of TV programs bad. However, other people claim that as the number of
TV channels increase, people will like it.
To begin with, there are a lot of people
saying that since they can have more options to watch, they want more TV
channels. To be precise, if they do not don’t like what they are watching, they just
can change the channel and find what they want to watch. For example, my friend
who really likes watching TV says that he want more TV channels so that when he
cannot find an interesting funny channel, he can watch just a rerun. Therefore, there is no
harm in having a lot of channels.
On the other hand, too many TV channels can
make people puzzled with a lot of information. To be specific, by watching many TV
channels, they get lots of information, which leads to them to confuse can confuse them between what is
true and what they should trust. Also, with TV channels increasing, people have
to spend more time on choosing channels, which makes them watch TV more. For
this reason, people can be addicted to watching TV. With these reasons, TV
channels should not be provided too much.
In conclusion, as stated above, both views
have strong points. However, it seems that there are more disadvantages of
increasing of the number of TV channels. Thus, I think that providing many TV
channels is not good for people.
단점에서 오프토픽 난거 같긴한데 이렇게 쓰면 5점은 넘을 수 있나 어떻게 생각하시는지 보고 싶어 올려봅니다!
총평: (6/6/6/6) 6.0
일단 단점에서 전혀 오프토픽이 나지 않았습니다. 고로 5점은 무조건 넘겼고, 설령 본론2가 오프토픽이었다고 하더라도, 그거에 대한 감점+암기에 대한 감점까지 다 때려도 5.0은 넘겼을 겁니다. 4점대는 진짜 특정 부분이 엄청나게 심각한 경우가 아닌 이상 절대로 안 나오니까 걱정 마세요~대신 이전에도 말씀드렸듯이 Task1은 꼭 챙기셔야 합니다.
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