The table gives information concerning the number of visitors by age who visited a particular museum from 1997 and 2003. Overall, it is clear that attendance among all age groups maintained a stable rate except for people who are from 46 to 60 years old. (여기의 경우 stable 이 아닌, 증가세로 잡아주셔야 합니다. 실제로 total에서 보면 한번의 예외를 제외하곤느 꾸준히 증가하고 있죠. stable 은 숫자가 꾸준히 비슷할 때에만 써주시면 됩니다.)
One of the things to note is that visitors in all of the age groups increased relatively as the time passes except for the oldest members of society group. It is notable that museum visitors who are between 0 and 30 years old accounted for three quarters of all museum visitors. These figures remained a stable rate of approximately 35,000. (여기 역시 서론과 마찬가지로 적절하지 않습니다. 후반부에는 38,000명까지 치솟아요.) Moreover, an interesting numerical feature is seen at visitors over 60 years old because this figure never surpassed 100 during the period.
Also,
it is noteworthy that the number of entry decreased as age increased. Among
patrons who are between 31 and 45 years old, it is shown show that this group’s change
remained a stable rate of around 60% (수학 시간이 아니기 때문에 이런 것까지 계산하실 필요는 없습니다. 숫자만 잘 맞는다면 감점이 되지는 않지만, 그렇다고 딱히 이점 역시 없어요.) over the period. Lastly, the number of visitors in the middle aged group
of people (46-60) fluctuated at approximately 340 and 940, respectively.
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항상 표 문제에서는 주어가 정확해야 합니다. 일례로 마지막 문장만 봐도, fluctuate의 대상은 해당 그룹 자체가 아닌, 해당 그룹의 방문자 수입니다. 이처럼 항상 주어가 정확한지를 꼭 체크해주세요! 수고하셨습니다 :)
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