Your Answer ▼ There has been a controversial issue in terms of running a business by family members. Even though some people argue that it has a lot of advantages, I believe that it should be banned for lasting development. (초록 부분은 매우 중요한 사항으로, 총평에서 별도로 말씀드리겠습니다.) This essay will spell out the pros and cons of the company family owned and the reasons why I disagree with these companies. First of all, it a business run within a family (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 작성되어서는 안 됩니다.) has many advantages in efficiency and communication in company’s decision. In general, we usually communicate easily and better in family than with other people. So (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다.), when they (앞에는 1인칭이 왔는데 여기는 그렇지 않은 상황이죠. 뭘로 쓰든지 여하튼 통일을 해주세요!) meet an emergency situation in business, they can treat their problems efficiently by making a decision within close family members. According to a recent news report, the family company showed that it can deal with economic recession more than other companies. Many experts say that it is because they can have a proper solution through fast and efficient relationship system.(여기서 엔터 한번 더 쳐주셔야 합니다. 문단이 구분될 때에는 엔터키를 두 번 쳐주시고, 그 외의 상황에는 엔터 없이 스페이스바로 글을 이어주세요!) However, there is a serious problem in the family-run business. In my opinion, monitoring system is one of the most important part in running a company. This audit function can be weakened in relationship of family members. For example, Samsung, the biggest company in Korea has been developed through family-run, but embezzlement problems have arisen these days. Studies have indicated that Samsung should stop family members’ for sustainable development. To sum up, there are merits and demerits about family-run companies. As I mentioned above, efficiency and communication are main advantages, but it has a fatal drawback in weak monitoring and improper money use. Therefore, we should control and maintain properly these businesses for long-term development. |