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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsary part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
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▶ Your Answer :
Nowadays, it is expected to have a new programme for student to participate in a unpaid community service as a compulsary part or, some high schools are already operating the programme. Some people assert that the unpaid community service by high school students needs difinitely to be done. On the contrary, I strongly disagree with it. There are several reasons why I don't agree with it.
First of all, doing unpaid community service compulsorily might cause negative effects on students. Generally, volunteer work should be done from the heart by people who really have a sincere intent. However, the compolsory community service from school can give a resistance feeling to students about it. For example, if teacher forces students to go and participate in some communnity service, students may regard it as a homework or assessment.
Furthermore, obiligatory community service can transmute the main purpose of volunteer work. As written above, the essence of volunteer work is unpromted. However, it can be changed to get benefits for students. For instance, in my country, Korea, most of high school already applied the unpaid community service. Students can get mark as much as time they performed service. As the result, students find community service works to get a high mark or good impression from teachers. Moreover, sometimes it is happened to make up a fake evidence papers by themself in order to hand in to teacher. In other words, these behaviors show that some students completely ignore the nature meaning for community service.
In conclusion, there is a evidence to suggest that many students are still performing community service not just for their benefits but from their heart. But overall, it is clear that unpaid community service as a compolsory part is carried out in a negative purpose in many cases. Therefore I think schools should not compel students to do it and teachers need to lead students to volunteer the community service by themself.
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