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<Topic> You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In the last 20 years there have been significant
developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the
World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT
are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? |
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It is commonly
believed that the proliferation of advanced technologies has enhanced the quality
of people’s live enormously for the last two decades, especially, communication-wise.
Even though some people say that the IT may give negative impacts such as overloaded
duties outside the workplace, I would like to opine that the internet and online
communication surely thrive the prosperity of societies on the Earth. In this
essay, the supportive ideas will be suggested and discussed. Although
sometimes burgeoning industries have downsides, I strongly believe that the growth
of IT brings us tremendous upsides to the human-being. One reason is that, it
allows the effective communication which can be performed anytime and anywhere.
Thanks to the improved interaction system on the internet as well as
applications in portable devices, people who live in overseas countries are able
to talk with their loved one in real-time. They can share their joy and sorrow
like what it used to be shared before. What is more, the World Wide Web enables human
to share the latest information globally, for instance, during the pandemic
period, countries exchange the up-to-date number of COVID-19 patients as fast
as they could. Since crossing borders is ordinarily happen around the world, updating
the steeply growing number of patients with coronavirus was essential. It is no doubt
that the normalized real-time communication changed lots of things, the other
example is that paging doctor or police whenever we need. We can receive prescriptions
without going to the GP physically but by using applications as well as informing
the initial symptoms to a medical professional. In addition, witnesses may declare
offenses by real-time video call to the police. These proactive performances degraded
not only the crime rate but also that of patients who might suffer from critical
illness such as heart attack and stroke due to early attending of rescuers’ emergency
contact. According
to the above analysis, I am truly convinced the developed technologies’ disadvantages
cannot overshadow the innumerable benefits. By improving it more than now, we
may pursue the blissful and vigorous daily lives. |
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항상 감사드립니다 :)