You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
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Nowadays in modern society, various advertisement is shown to consumers. In this regard, it is often argued that the advertisement occurs a negative effect on viewers. In this phenomenon, I strongly agree that without regulations of the advertisements makes people get stress.
To begin with, there are amount of advantages when people avoid advertisements. First of all, generally, the advertisement does not consider the consumers which they really need because most of the companies aim is incoming profits however when these negative advertisements are disappearing then people can save money and time. For example, when people look at the advertisements on Facebook, they advertise indiscriminately even though they are not essential items and if the government regulates these advertisements then people do not need to consider buying these unnecessary articles, and these processes people can learn which products they really need it.
Moreover, indiscriminate advertising leads people in negative ways. First and foremost, in recent economist's study the number of poor people is increasing rapidly in the short term they investigate thousand of people and survey about the percentage of expenses spent during the month and the result are quite interesting. Most people tend to spend their money on unnecessary products and in these processes continued they were able to see that their money was decreasing every month and this is the main reason for the increasing percentage of poor people.
As it has been demonstrated, mainly the advertisement has a negative effect on people who really want to buy essential products and if these negative advertisements are regulated from the government then consumers can save their money and time.
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