You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
- explain the reasons for the noise
- apologise
- describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
(무슨 편지가 됐든 간에 내가 누군지부터, 어떤 사람인지부터 밝히고 가셔야 합니다.) I heard from the security guard that our floor has a sound problem from the security guard. Fist of all, I want to a say sorry to you about the sound problem. I think the main problem is the running machine. 3 days ago, my father bought the latest running machine because he wanted wants to lose his weight. In fact, when I saw the running machine in the living room I was worried about the sound problem. However, my father wanted wants to use it without consideration and this is why the problem happened that the problem happens.
Whatever it is I want to make an apology to you all about this negative phenomenon. Before this problem happens I had to regulate my father's behavior however, as a result, my complacency make this problem. I should have regulated my father's behavior before this happened, but my complacency made this problem. Within 2 days I will replace the running machine to the warehouse and I think the sound problem will be solved.
I want a to make an apology, apologies and if you do not mind I want to give an expensive beef as a gift.
Yours faithfully,
WooJin Jung.
총평: (6/6/6/5) 6.0
편지글은 비교적 쉬운 편이기 때문에 이쪽에서의 점수는 6.0에 맞춰지겠지만, task2까지 고려했을 때는 5.5일 확률이 더 높을 겁니다. 그리고 그 이유는 문법에 있고요. 문법이 완벽할 필요는 없고, 그럴 수도 없지만, 최소한 마지막 줄 정도와 같은 표현은 정확하게 적어주시는 게 좋아요.
대신 modesty님은 라이팅에서 6.0을 받으면 좋지만, 5.5로도 아마 크게 지장은 없을테니 여기에 너무 크게 부담가지실 필요는 없을 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)
글자수: 173자
목표점수: 6.0
이전 시험점수: 5.5
다음시험: 7월초