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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : In the future, there will be no need for humans to study or work as hard because there will be machines and computers that will do all sorts of jobs for us. Some people look forward to this advancement, while others dread its coming. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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▶ Your Answer :
New technologies are developing have been developed fast especially in the areas of information technology (IT) and new forms of science. The objective in this rapid increase in the development of new types of technologies, such as machines stemed s from humans’ basic needs, to live our life more efficiently and enjoyably.
Machines and computers are designed to follow the given tasks. Once their task has been is set, machines are operated according to it. They work repeatedly and make no mistakes, which saves a great amount of time and energy. For example, cars are one of these the types of machines and invention of this amazing transportation method has allowed us to travel wherever we want in a relatively short period of time >> this가 뭐죠? task 가 주어지면 그에 의해 수행되고 반복적으로 실수없이 일을 하고 시간과 에너지를 절약하는게 과연 차를 예로 드는게 맞을까요? . Also >> 문두에 also so and or but을 쓰지 않습니다, there are other useful devices/machines such as TVs and laptops which are very familiar to our daily lives saving enormous amount of time. The fact that there are too many of them in our life makes it hard for us to realise how different our life would be without them, but the existence of these devices is almost compulsory nowadays.
On the other hand, these useful machines are likely to substitute some of the jobs available for our society members at the moment. The rate at which jobs are disappearing is quite proportional to the speed of technologies being developed. For instance, it is generally believed that in the future jobs such as actors/actresses are likely to disappear as computer designing skill which is well known to us as ‘CG’ will replace them in the future . Young people who are currently working on this or the people who currently have their jobs as actors/actresses might be pointless a non-needed people one day and this simply means some parts of the whole population will not be needed for what they are good at.
In conclusion, it might be difficult for some people to accept the impact of developing technologies on their lives, but it is happening at the moment and must be done soon or later. People would face this situation and possibly the government could help for those who are likely to be affected significantly by developing technologies by supporting them with subsidies.
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감사합니다. + 죄송합니다 두개씩이나 써서.. 이 번에 아이엘츠 봤는데 생각보다 라이팅이 너무 안 좋게 나와서 화가나서..ㅜㅜ