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These three pie charts composed of five categories shows that total school spending in 1981, 1991, and 2001 respectively over two decades. The charts were composed of five categories.
Among them, teachers’ salaries were accounted for the highest percentage in the all the three pies charts, 40%, 50%, and 45% respectively. >> 본문에 어울리는 얘기이며 서론엔 쓸 내용이 아닙니다
The second>> 대쉬 빼주세요 largest group was other workers’ wages in 1981, while this category had gone went down to 22% in 1991, and dropped to 15% in 2001. There was an increase in the portion of school spending for buying books from 15% to 20% between 1981 and 1991. However, its figure was plummeted to 9%. The portion of purchasing furniture and equipment also decreased from 15% to 5%. But >> but also so and or 는 문두에 쓰지 않습니다 it had amazingly increased amazingly to 23%. In terms of insurance, originally, there was only an 1% increase in insurance between 1981 and 1991. However, 5% of a quite big rise was shown for the next ten years.
To sum up, it is suggested that wages of other workers had decreased definitely, while insurance had increased steadily, and other categories had been fluctuated for the two decades. (176 words)
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