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The advent of smartphone brought us innovation in terms of communication. It enables people to contact each other using the Internet, >> 콤마 넣어주세요 no matter how long distance between people. However, there are side effects by using social network services, which are main method of communication by smartphone, are private information spill, excessive flow of information and messing up personal relationship and so on. >> 서론에서 내용을 SNS라고 제한시키면 안 되고 또한 이런 자세한 얘긴 본론에서 해야합니다 그냥 이런 문제가 대두된다 부작용 때문에 나쁘다고 생각한다 이 정도로만 서론 작성해주시면 됩니다 Therefore, >> 문두 부사 다음 콤마입니다 In my opinion, communication with new technology is not useful, comparing to its side effect.
Using Social Network Service >> 소문자로 써주세요, so called SNS, communication with others living in a far region would be easy. We can know news of even my friends who live in the opposite side of the Earth, and chat with each other. It is also possible that to have a face-to-face meeting regardless of physical distance. At this point, the important thing is may be that the cost for communicating will be close to zero if we can access the Internet. The innovation made the Earth different countries smaller closer.
However, smartphone brought us a lot of unnecessary information that has been kept updating. By doing this, we can have >> get 동사는 피해주세요 fun from that, while we are likely to be addicted to smartphone. It takes a lot of time from us>>?? , besides it is hard to control using a smartphone both children and adults. Another reasons is that people who we have to or/and need to contact, we can communicate with other means as we did few years before >> 문장을 이어주는 접속사 없습니다. When before the era of smartphone before the non-smartphone era, we could keep in touch with each other by using feature phone >>??, even non- not a mobile phone.
Before we use any smart-technology, becoming smart guy is first. Excessive using of smart devices, we are likely to being an idiot rather than smart. We should keep in mind that recognizing importance of relationship in real world than cyber space. >> 결론이 Task의 문제와 무슨 상관이 있나요?
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