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Many of children are sometimes heard advised from their parents that the young have to listen to adults. Perhaps, >> 문두 부사 뒤에 콤마 넣어주세요 these words it means that older people are wiser than the young relatively. I totally agree with this opinion. I and believe that people should learn about the past time , however smart they are.
Firstly, people can prepare for the future that is coming up on the basis of the incident of the past time. People don’t>> do not know when a natural disaster or man-made disaster will happen. All they can do is just prepare for that disaster. If people get>>get동사는 피해주세요 receive the information about previous catastrophes from ancestors’ reports, they can decrease the damage of a disaster. In addition, there are always so many crimes in society. If we don’t >> do not have previous instances, it will be more difficult to arrest culprits>> than what ? 비교대상이 딱히 설정하기 힘들 땐 비교급보다 그냥 much difficult 혹은 very 등으로 써주시면 됩니다. They are not completely the same with the past crimes, but the former examples will be helpful to the police.>> 한 본문에 두개의 주장이 들어가면 두 주장 모두 흐지부지하게 됩니다 확실히 하나를 잡고 들어가야 합니다
Secondly, previous examples can give some advices in various fields to people living in the present. To start with, social science is different from natural science. For this reason, there are no fixed rules in the world of humanity. In natural science, if people know the law of nature, they can predict the further situation. However, this is not applied to social things. However, people want and need to know what will happen when they do something. This is why people living now have to learn about the past time. The previous examples can give some hints. It is not perfect, but a great service to what people do. For instance, those>>?? can be helpful in the economic field and the political field as well as in everyday life.
All people are living in the present, but this moment will become a past time, too. The past, the present, >> 세개 이상 나열에서 마지막 and 앞에 콤망비니다 and the future are like such a long line, so each moment is related to other moments. Some examples that happened in the past days can be a good teacher. It means people need to understand not only the present they live in but also the past.
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본문에서 지적해드린 부분만 신경써주시고 나머진 문법 상에서 조금만 더 봐주시길 바랍니다
don't 처럼 줄임말은 쓰지 말아주세요 past도 너무 많습니다
Task Achievement - 7 Coherence and Cohesion - 7 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 6
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