■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Topic ▼As the number of private cars has increased, so too has the level of pollution in many cities. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem? |
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Your Answer ▼Nowadays,it is evident that more and more people use private vehicles. Private vehicles are convenient and provide a lot of benefits for our humanity but some people afraid that private vehicles cause critical environmental pollution. Personal cars have used by citizens commonly instead public transports. Because personal cars can bring the driver to the destination more conveniently and efficiency than public transports. However, due to too many people using the personal cars, it is afraid that personal cars produce considerably great amount of carbon dioxide and fine dust. Because Abnormally huge amount of carbon dioxide and fine dust cause atmosphere pollution. Therefore, many people assert that governments should find ways to reduce citizen's private vehicles usage. There are some of the ways. First of all, recovering public transports will helpful to reduce citizen's personal cars usage. If citizens satisfy to public transports, citizens would not have any reasons to use personal cars. As a consequence, private vehicles usage will decrease naturally. In addition, other way is forcing extra fees to drivers who drive at rush hours. Drivers will concern about extra fees, as a result, people could avoid to use private vehicles at that time. However, these kind of legal restrictions could cause drivers dissatisfaction. In conclusion, it is clear that personal cars that drived a number of people cause several environmental problems. However, if governments and individuals try reduce to using private vehicles and consider nature environment, humanity will resolve the environmental problems. |
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EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: /9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | /9 | /9 | /9 | /9 |
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