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Nowadays, running online shopping business is more and more
prevalent around the world, which means that stores could be disappeared. I personally
think that this phenomenon could cause negative development.
On the one hand, shopping
on the Internet could provide people who are busy with convenience. As most
people these days work around the clock, they neither have enough time to shop nor
want to waste of time while going to stores and coming back home. Moreover, owners
of online shopping malls could save a lot of money since they do not need to rent
any tangible store. It means that they just need a small space to store their goods.
This shows that online shopping malls have optimistic implications on both
shoppers and owners.
Despite the positive effect,
developing online shopping malls would be more negative. As people do not need to
go out to purchase what they need or want, not only shopping stores but other kinds
of shops would go bankrupt. To invigorate economy, a number of people should consume
outside not indoor. For example, in Korea, there were massive shopping centres which
attracted a great number of people even from other countries. However, people do
not go shopping there anymore and as a result, many stores had to closed permanently.
This illustrates that with developing online shopping malls, economy is affected
in a negative way.
In conclusion, increasing
the number of online shopping malls would have positive development, however, it
results in more negative effects on economy of shopping industry.
세심한 첨삭 항상 너무 감사드려요. 다음주 시험에서 6.5가 꼭 나왔으면 좋겠는데ㅠㅠ 제가 문제를 정확하게 이해하지 못하는게 문제일까요.. 아니면 아이디어가 없는게 문제일까요 작문실력이 문제일까요ㅠㅠ 작성한다고 하긴 하는데 실력이 늘지가 않는 것 같아서 고민이에요... 늘 봐주셔서 감사합니다;) |