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It is often argued that in sports, despite of athletes’ bad behaviours on or off the ground, as long as their performance is a phenomenon, their unethical decisions do not effect are not effecting on the play. In this essay, I will show why I strongly disagree with this statement.
First of all, in team sports such as soccer, basketball and baseball, one player’s bad behaviour has detrimental impacts on their teamwork. It means while an athlete performs brilliantly, she or he does not coordinate and play by her or himself, it is not as effective as when all the team members perfectly harmonised. Additionally, off the ground, if there is a discord between team players, it can distract their performance. For example, during a soccer training for a match, if a player is not assisted from other co-players because of that player’s bad attitude towards other players, it could eventually distract their actual performance. (얘는 앞에서 했던 말에 soccer만 붙여서 그대로 반복하는 것에 지나지 않습니다. 단, 6.0만 필요하시기 때문에 고치라고 말씀드리지는 않을게요.)
Moreover, sports have a huge fan-following and their fans tend to mimmic their behaviour even though when it is a harmful action. In detail, youngsters who are not fully able to justify sport celebrities actions and fans could imitate or support their sport celebrities' actions whether it is a moral behaviour, or unethical behaviour. This above statement could be found in adult's actions since when people have a bias, they are likely to loose their function of judgement on the bias's decision.
In conclusion, professional athletes should act morally and carefully both on and off the ground because their harmful attitude can damage their team bond and their fans are willing to imitate their actions.
267자. 아이디어가 도통 떠오르지 않아서 브레인스토밍 하는것만 살짝 참조했어요. 2021년에도 한달간 잘 부탁드립니다 ^^ 받아야 할 점수는 6.0입니다! |