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It is true that advertising gives plenty of
effects on people’s expenditure. Although it is the best way to resist temptation
from advertisements, we normally are blinded from them. As a result, we can not save
our money to prepare for our future and might overspend regardless of our budgets. (여기서 엔터 한번 더 쳐주셔야 합니다.)
One of the main reason for this phenomenon
is continuous contact with advertisements. Due to the development of technology
such as TV, cell phones and tablets, many people can watch a lot of
advertisements regardless of their intentions. That is why, people have possibilities
to spend more money than that what they can afford, resulting in being unable to
save money for their future. Moreover, thousands Thousands
of advertisements which can be seen in media induce people to spend money on buying
items by showing only the advantages of a product. That is, even though some products
are not necessary for people to live, they buy them by being blinded. Thus, it
is money-wasting and if this happens a lot, people have a possible to be in debt indebted.
To handle this unfavorable habit, we should
make efforts. Firstly, governments should regulate regulation on advertisements by
reducing the number of advertisements because the biggest cause is inexhaustible
contact with advertising. As well as this, individual efforts are also needed
to avoid overspending by advertisements. People should try to stay away from
the media and distinguish what is necessary from what is luxury. In other words,
before they buy some products which are seen in advertisements, they have to
check if there is the same thing in a cheaper price. Also, people should set the amount of money
they can spend a day to reduce of overspending.
To sum up, we are encountered with mighty temptations
which distract us from saving money to save money and make spend our budget by advertisements. Therefore,
we need to be wise enough to control our spending habits by ourselves and try
to avoid watch advertisements.
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