Nowadays, it is obvious that the traffic congestion in nearly all over the world is on increasing and cities are becoming busier. In my opinion, this problem must be tackled because it is a global issue and most of >> most of는 한정적인 말입니다 most of 다음은 주로 them us 등이 나옵니다 people, especially who live in big cities, are suffering from that>> the overcrowding.
Firstly, one of the main reasons, which causes the traffic jam, >> 문장 중간에 which 수식절은 콤마로 나눠줍니다 is that the majority of people prefer to take their own cars instead of public transportation. However, it is not impossible to find good and effective ways to control the congestion >> '사람들이 자차를 탄다' 라고 했으면 그에 대한 설명이 필요합니다 보통 왜? 라는 생각을 해주세요 그럼 답은 나옵니다 "편하니까" 편하다는 이유로 대중교통을 꺼리고 본인이 직접 운전해서 어딜 간다 등으로 써주세요 . Public transportation is the easiest way to solve this trouble. If there are comfortable and cheap public transportations such as trains and buses, they will make people like people will be likely to use them better than to drive. For instance, in Manchester, stagecoach buses are the most convenient buses vehicles that help the city its people to have comfortable life in its roads and on the streets during rush hours. In fact, governments should provide much better public transportation in terms of conditions and charge prices that are affordable for everyone.
Another solution to solve that traffic issue is to charge the congestion fee for every car that will go into the city centre. It will either discourage people from driving into that area, or raise more money for public transportation>>?? 갑자기 대중교통에 대한 돈을 올리란 말이 뭔가요?. A good example of this situation is London, which now has a congestion charge. Going to the city centre in London costs about £8 per day.
In conclusion, the problem of traffic congestion can be solved by improving public
transportation and by charging drivers who enter the city centres.
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