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In modern society, people have faced lots
of environmental problems. Some people believe that the loss of particular
species of plants and animals is the main environmental problem. However,
others assert that there are more important environmental problems such as air
pollution. Both issues are crucial but I think the latter later is much more severe environmental
problem these days.
To
begin with, some people point out that the loss of particular species of plants
and animals is the main environmental problem. This is because some species have lost loss their own habitats by human’s reckless development. For example in Korea,
the black bear that has a specific shape was endangered few decades years ago. The
population of the black bear decreased dramatically since they have lost their
habitat by people’s hunting and development. (이 문제가 해결된 것에 대해서는 전혀 중요하지 않습니다. 이를 대신해서 흑곰의 멸종 위기가 '왜' 심각한 문제인지를 적어주셔야 해요. 대략 본론 두 번째 문단과 비슷하게 만들어주시면 됩니다.) The black bear almost in danger of
extinction. However, by the efforts of the Korea government, this black bear has
become protected species and the recovery process was very hard and also the
government efforts still ongoing until now. Therefore, some people believe that
the loss of particular species is the main environmental issue.
On
the other hand, others assert that there are more severe environmental problems
such as air pollution. Air pollution problem This is related to people’s lives directly
and other species as well. For instance, the UK also suffered from severe air
pollution issue because of the high development of industry. The citizens found it was
hard to breathe because of smog and high concentration of dust. Also, Korean has
similar problem these days. Because of high concentration of microdust in Korea,
people can not breathe well without wearing a specific mask. If we people aspirate high
concentration of microdust consistently, the microdust accumulates in our lungs.
So it which (문장을 and but so 로 시작해서는 안 됩니다.) increases the possibility of lung cancer. Therefore, air pollution is a much more important environmental problem these days.
In
conclusion, both issues are important environmental problems these days. However,
air pollution problem is much more severe problem because it affects people’s
health. Therefore, I think there are more important environmental problems than the loss of particular species such as air pollution, because this can directly affect people's health. air pollution problem is more important environmental
problem than the loss of particular species.
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