Your Answer ▼Modern
communications such as email and phone call do not provide the sincere mind of
people. Thus, writing Writing letters in hand/in person (추가가 필수인 표현은 아닌데, 넣어주시는 게 좋긴 합니다.) are still necessary to check the mind of people. I strongly
believe that writing letters are more useful to let people’s mind than modern communications. (여기는 수정해주셔야 합니다. 편지글 vs 모던 커뮤니케이션을 비교하면서 둘 간 효용성을 따지는 게 목적이 아니라, 과연 편지를 여전히 쓸 필요가 있는지를 따져야 해요. 쉼표 전후의 부분은 같아보일 수도 있지만 전혀 다릅니다.)
For
example To begin with, Statistics from the BBC, many people feel a genuine mind when they get a written writing letter than email and phone call. Because of this, people prefer to
write a letter to inform their serious problems or a situation which is congratulation.
Therefore, Modern communications (고유명사가 아닙니다. 소문자로 시작해주시고, 저 밑에도 다 수정해주세요~) not only will not replace writing letters but
also are insufficient to give their mind than writing letters.
Furthermore, unlike Unlike
Modern communications, writing letters can be preserved for a long time. If
people do not save a letter and a record of phone call, all the records would be deleted.
Also, even if people get a new letter in email, sometimes, people are not able
to check the letter because of a virus virous or system’s or systematic problems. Because of this,
people want writing letters when delivering important information. Thus,
writing letters are one of the valuable methods to save people’s precious
remember.
In
conclusion, it is true that even thought modern communications are convenient convenience,
it is difficult to check a sincere mind and save precious memories remember. |