Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that space research is disadvantageous because it takes a lot of money. However, there is a more persuasive argument that investing in space exploration is worth the cost due to its usefulness for our future.
On the one hand, many (논제에서는 장단점 중 무엇이 더 큰지에 대해 대립하라고 요구하지 않습니다. 그저 장단점을 언급하라고 할 뿐이죠.) some people say that space exploration has more drawbacks than advantages. Many experts found that researching space itself requires an overly excessive amount of money, considering its performance so far is not as outstanding. For example, with the amount of money invested in finding new planets, 10 million of people who are starving to death in the Earth could survive. In this regard, the money for researching space can be used more meaningfully, which can lead to practical aids to disadvantaged people.
Nevertheless, investing money in space exploration is worth the cost because it can make us prepared for potential crisis. For example, people in the Earth may suffer from demographic saturation as time passes, the studies and research that were for space exploration can provide us with solutions, such as new planets where human can live in. In addition, this type of studies can find more developed planets, which we can think of as a role model when facing difficult situations in the long term. (이 문단의 경우 우주연구에 대한 장점을 잘 설명해주셨기에 내용상 문제는 전혀 없지만, 일인칭이 사용되지 않도록 수정해주실 필요는 있습니다. 영작 실력은 좋으신만큼 제가 방안을 따로 제시해드리지 않아도 잘 바꿔주시리라 생각하지만, 혹시 모르신다면 댓글 주시면 알려드릴게요~)
In conclusion, while there are some disadvantages to spending money on researching space, it is evident that there are far more advantages to continuing to invest money in space exploration. (결론을 지금처럼 적어서는 안 되는데, 자세한 건 총평을 참고해주세요.) |