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It is widely accepted that having diverse experiences in school is one of the important part of education. Some people claim that doing as many activities as possible in high school should be enhanced, while others think that school have to focus their academic educations. I agree the former opinion and discuss the specific reasons on this essay. Firstly, social activities provide plenty of experiences which can not be absorbed by books. In other worlds, involving the community’s problems and doing conative task on their own realize what they should truly persuade for their society. (원래 동명사 주어로써 단수동사를 쓰는데 and로 연결되면 이경우엔 복수동사를 써야하나요?) for example, in Korea, since 2016 the government announce one project named of ‘ free-semester’ to all high school students. The program encourage more student engage with social activities such as caring elderly people, delivering necessaries of life to poor family. Second of all, It enhances student’s morality. To specify, the more student participate those kind of social programs, the more generous minds grow well. It makes student to have valuable life and to get meaningful opportunity to learn something new. For example, the department of education in Korea, they regulate student’s volunteer activities in laws. Student have to spend time over 15 hours during high school. If they can not do these tasks, they might struggle to graduate. In conclusion, personally, I agree all types of high school social programs should be execrated for students. Because learning ‘social-knowledge’ and having valuable life are important extremely important no more than anything. *제가 논제에 compulsory의 의미를 몰라서 유추되는대로 썼는데 오프토픽까진 아니었을까요 ㅠㅠ?
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