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The bar chart accounts for the proportions
of the population of those who had have own housing, and rented other's housing in England and
Wales from 1981 (이렇게 숫자를 틀릴 경우, 그리고 이게 일회성에 그치지 않을 경우 생각보다 더 큰 영향을 줍니다. 뒤의 30년도 마찬가지이고요.) to 2011 for 30 years.
In general, from From 1981 to 2011, there are remarkable
changes in the percentages of families who live in owned and rented housing. (단순히 놀라운 변화가 있다라고만 적는 것은 크게 의미가 없습니다. ~는 증가의 경향을, ~는 감소의 경향을 보였다라고 적어주시면 돼요. 이렇게 작성하면 바로 뒤의 it 으로 시작하는 문장도 굳이 쓰지 않아도 됩니다.) It
can be found that the extremely opposite tendency exists in each figure.
Firstly, in 1918, the percentage of the
people who are the owners of accommodation in England and Wales was about 20%, which was the lowest figure of the given period. However, the proportions increased at around 70% (여기의 70%는 어떻게 해서 구하신 수치인가요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다. 정말 중요한 사항이므로 꼭 댓글 주세요!) by 50
percent in 2001. Compared with this, the highest percentage of the tenants was
around 80 percent in 1918. Nevertheless, the percentage decreased at to around 30
percent in 2001.
Secondly, as I said, (task 1에서는 1인칭을 쓸 필요가 없습니다.) there is a significantly opposite tendency between the increases and decrease of the two options are
significantly opposite tendency such as increasing or decreasing between two
options. However, during 2001 to 2011, the percentage of owners decreased by
about 5 percent, and the percentage of tenants increased by about also 5
percent (비율 수치 간 산술적인 차이는 퍼센트 포인트로 계산합니다. 즉, 여기는 5 percentage points 로 표현해야 맞습니다.). |