Your Answer ▼ Sedack These days, most children are guaranteed money from their parents. Some people think parents should teach their children to handle money matters. In this essay, the best way of teaching a child about money and some examples of mine my experiences will be discussed.
It is really important that using to use money wisely in people's life. Thus, parents' role of educating their children about the money is significant. The best way of teaching youngsters about money is that parents for parents to show what is the good way of spending money by showing themselves' their consumption habits. That is, parents always try to use money wisely, efficiently, and do not waste. (이 문장 앞에는 소비 패턴을 보여줘야 한다라고 되어있는 반면, 이 문장에는 평소 습관을 얘기하고 있네요. 둘 중 하나로 통일해주세요~CC에 영향을 주는 사항입니다. 밑의 문단까지 고려했을 때, 파란 부분 쪽에 맞춰 The best way~로 시작하는 문장을 수정해주시는 게 좋습니다. show 보다는 naturally demonstrate 등의 표현이 나을 거에요. 결론과 비슷한 맥락으로 바꿔주시면 됩니다. '보이다' 와 '자연스럽게 보이다' 는 꽤나 큰 차이가 있습니다.) If children grow up in the great expenditure environment, they will naturally realize how they can deal with money matters.
For example, my parents always seriously consider how they can spend money before going to shopping. They limit the budget, make a the list of items they are planning to buy buying items, and select the appropriately priced items. Although my parents did not personally teach me the way of using money, I naturally acquired the parents' style of consuming. As a result, now, I never waste my money whenever not only I'm shopping but also I have to consider the expenditure in my life. (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요!)
In conclusion, the best way to teach a child about money is that parents make a great environment for wise expenditure by naturally showing their good habits in consumption.
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