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Recently, Some some people assert that growing up with siblings has more benefits than people who grow growing (앞에서 growing 으로 잡았으니까, 여기서 갑자기 people 로 선회해서는 안 됩니다.) up alone without siblings, and only children have insufficient social skills that lead to success. I partly (이 단어를 넣어야 본론 첫 번째 문단이 정당화됩니다. 만약에 이 단어가 없을 경우, 본론 두 개는 모두 disagree 관련해서만 채워주셔야 해요.) disagree with this topic, and in this regard, I will write this essay with concerning my opinions.
It is partially true that having brothers and sisters could affect be affected on learning social skills. Those people have shared Siblings share many things like toys, clothes, food and spaces since an early age. For instance, there is only one stuff like the piano, an electronic car toy and television in a house, so when their sister or brother use one toy, another child would have to wait for finishing that, and watching TV would be the same situation. For these reasons, people who have has siblings have learned about sharing somethings, patience and consideration, and those learning could help children improve their social skills. As a result, people who grow up with siblings could be gain some pros.
However, I believe that only children can also learn social skills as much as people who have siblings. These days, children go to kindergarten when they are 4-5 years, and they spend a lot of time in nursery with their peers, so they naturally can acquire social skills like sharing, communicating with others and consideration as they contact with other friends. In addition, over the world, there are many successful people socially in spite of growing up alone, and they are good at communicating with people and managing their businesses well. Thus, whether a child has siblings or not does not seem to show any relevance with the acquire of social skills it is irrelevant between only children and social skills.
In conclusion, even though growing up together would have some advantages on social skills, only children also can learn in the kindergarten when they are young as them.
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