Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that the best way to succeed is being an expert on a single part area. However, I firmly believe that people should concentrate on more than one skill, because skills more than one and it can help them achieve what they want.
To begin with, focusing only on a single skill discourages people let people being discouraged, making them feel be bored. Whoever trains the sole technique, they can lose the interest of it as if when people eat chocolate cake on every meal, they will be sick of it. Even this This case even causes people to have a negative mind on setting goals. To take Take an example, students can learn how to polish a skill in the school and my friend among them wanted to be a businessman. So, he took a business administration but he felt ennui as time goes on. For this reason, he took another major which is linked to each other, studying both subjects with ho without any tedium.
On top of that, even if people concentrate on a single skill, there is no certain guarantee that it is the optimal way to succeed success. Being ready to take various skills has higher probability to achieve rather than an only single skill. Also, people should take another technique because they do not know what they may need in the future. For instance, in the school, my art teacher had a talent and skill on how to paint well but still, she did was not good at teaching her students. So (문장을 and but so 로 시작하는 것은 지양해주세요~), she has learned a teaching skill either so she was able to finally succeed in becoming an art teacher. This shows that taking two techniques has been more beneficial to her and then she can succeed to being art teacher finally. In fact, taking two techniques is more beneficial to her.
To sum up, concentrating on various skills a few skills more than on helps people take a goal more attractive (여기는 댓글 주세요~) and increases the possibility to success. For these reasons, I disagree with the statement that being professional on one skill is the optimal way to achieve goals.
맞아요. ㅠㅠ 제일 처음에 쓰던 task 2들은 모법 답안들을 변형해서 썼던 것이에요. 하지만 저번 task 1이랑 이번 task 2들은 직접 다 제가 생각해서 작성해가고 있어요. 변형이 아닌 직접 생각을 해서 쓰려고 하다보니 어렵더라구요. 이렇게 하는 연습해나가고 있는 것이 더욱 저에게 좋을 것 같더라구요.
일단은 지난 일이니까 어쩔 수 없고, 이제부터라도 제대로 써보도록 노력해보죠! 파이팅입니다 :)
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