Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that even if web content is made for education, it is not useful as a method of education unuseful to let children learn. However, there is a more persuasive opinion that it should be utilized for a good way to teach young children.
On the one hand, web content can be created by anyone so it would be dangerous. Some contents allow to being bad words involve bad words and do not have any certain regulations to control children in social media. For example, when young-aged kids can watch the wrong content. (한국어로 바꿔보겠습니다. '예를 들면, 어린 아이들이 부적절한 컨텐크를 시청할 가능성이 있을 때.' 한국어로 보면 바로 비문임을 확인할 수 있죠. 뒷 문장과 잇던지 해서 완전한 문장으로 만들어주셔야 합니다.) In fact, they just want to learn something but they can not distinguish between the proper one to educate and a bad one. Also, it would affect them negatively. They may learn harmful things, even they do not intentionally act that and it will be seated on their body by habits too hard to fix it. (여기는 댓글 주세요!)
Nevertheless, web content made for educating let children study more easily and have more attractive motivations because it makes them entertained through methods such as like games. It is, which are very familiar with them on these days. Many things are circulated through the Internet media and the children simply know how to use web content by friends even though their parents do not teach it. For instance, some kids prefer to watch videos on web content for studying. They are likely to enjoy it more than taking a class in school. This is because they already used to utilize web content. It helps them further concentrate on curious and fun to learn. (내용상으로는 이 전까지는 잘 적어주셨는데, 여기에서 위의 말을 그대로 반복하고 있기 때문에 적절하지 않습니다.)
To sum up, while it is apparent that to use web content on media is dangerous because of learning rude and worse things without realizing it, it is undeniable that kids can be educated with entertaining compared to not using web content. (그래서 내가 어떤 쪽에 동의하는지 조금 더 명확히 밝혀주세요! 이 경우에는 1인칭 써도 됩니다.) |