One of the biggest problems facing the world today is poverty, which especially affects the majority of children. In fact, the increasing number of children are suffering from poverty and it brings about detrimental effects on society. Although it is problematic, it can be solved financial supports from governments.
The main effect of poverty on society is that it widens the gap between rich and poor people. To be specific, especially for children living in poverty, they have to find employment for a living as soon as possible instead of going to higher levels of school schools. Since they don’t cannot receive any high-level of education, which guarantees high salary, they only get low-income jobs. This flow results in widening the gap between the rich and the poor severely and makes it more difficult to unite the whole society.
This problem can be resolved by financial supports from governments because it is a complex and huge issue which cannot be overcome by personal efforts. Governments should establish special policies related to offer financial supports to students from disadvantaged families such as scholarship or free education systems. (여기서 엔터는 따로 치지 않습니다. 이것도 점수에 포함되는 사항이므로 주의해주세요!)
By supplying direct financial supports to children, they can have a chance to study further to get better jobs. For example, since the introduction of free high school education (이 부분이 없었으면 이 예시 역시 반복에 불과했을 겁니다. 그러나, 고교 의무교육, 무상교육이라는 표현을 통해 앞의 direct financial support 의 구체적인 양상을 보이고 있기 때문에 그래도 적절한 예시로 평가받을 수 있게 되고요.) in Korea, the rate of students in poverty choosing to go to university has increased significantly, which has helped ensure their better job opportunities.
In conclusion, poverty is one of the negative issues that prevent our society from being united. However, it can be tackled by governmental efforts to support children in poverty financially.