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Art and music classes should not be mandatory at school
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief students should not be taken art and music classes at school. However, I firmly believe that they must learn art and music classes because it’s not only help them develop their personality, but also release stresses and make them more creative.
To begin with, The most important period to build personality is teenager. For constructing personality, they need to experience as much as. Although teachers get across knowledge and teacher’s experiences for students, it’s just an indirectly thing. They must feel and think themselves. For instance, one researcher, works at psychology research center in USA, published thesis that ‘what’s effects of art and music classes on student?‘. He emphasized that taking art and music classes allows students to be more well rounded-personality, abundant feeling and freely express their feeling.
On top of that, By listening music and drawing on their hand, it can ease the level of student’s stress. Many students nowaday, just study consistently, are under the stress and could not take relax time. However, taking certain classes; have tendency of enjoy and killing time, they could secure relax times in curriculum. For example, educator indicates that having a break-time is helpful students to be more creative. Because students could forget or enable to vanish their bias of thinking ways when they consider and analyze something. It leads to make breakthrough.
To sum up, Art and music classes should be mandatory at school is possible students to make well-rounded personality and be more innovative.
In conclusion, Art and music classes have to required to be mandatory in curriculum.
people should only concentrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It’s a common belief that just working and focusing on their own tasks is the best way for successful life. However, I firmly believe that person who want to succeed must have both skills single and group Since projects nowaday are bigger and globalized than ever before and our society consists of groups.
To begin with, as we work in globalized projects, we have to work with many companies from other nations and foreign workers. Therefore, the importance of collaboration is increasing rapidly, team work and communicating have also being emphasized. This means that only a person outstanding and getting promotion by concentrating on a single skill is not a factor of succeed anymore. Growing with colleagues by communicating, sometimes conflicting so on, is more possible way. By building a good relationship with them, their fame will be spread and got scouts then earn more money.
On top of that, Our society is not for individuals and run by groups. In whole history, human had established tribe culture then develop to the nation, it still maintains. from this view, society want to hire candidates who don’t focus on themselves. Also, psychologists said the way of work process is reflected of worker’s personality. In other words, the worker who takes their own tasks may be selfish. When we consider the characteristic of society, ideal candidate may be person who have group skills rather than single.
To sum up, given that work type of the current globalized project and social aspects, the better way for succeed is to construct a good relationship.
In conclusion, If someone want to succeed, they should not only concentrate on a single skill, but also grow ability of group.