<Topic> Some people
say that the extensive use of computer in schools will replace the role of
teachers. To what extend do you agree or disagree? |
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These days, a lot of schools take electronic
devices such as computers as one of the sources to educate students efficiently.
While it could be argued that computers are not able to substitute to the teachers’
role, I would like to opine that computers will take over the teachers’ duties
in the future.
It is a
well-known fact that teachers in school teach academic knowledge and assess students’
achievement. Due to the remarkable development in technologies, there are innumerable
computer programs which can educate students and evaluate students’ tests by using
programs such as e-learning courses and assessment programs. The other reason
is, computer programs can attract students’ attention better than conventional school
classes can since there are online courses which are comprised of colorful academic
videos and games. As
There are more arguments which can be
suggested in favor of computers
To condense,
although some people say that technologies cannot replace the traditional
teachers’ role, I truly believe that computers will give more effective and efficient
ways of study to children than that of teachers. |
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