Your Answer ▼Nowadays, it is evident that more and more people use private vehicles. Private vehicles are convenient and provide a lot of benefits for our humanity but some people are afraid that private vehicles cause critical environmental pollution. Personal cars have used by citizens commonly instead public transports.
Because personal cars can bring the driver to the destination more conveniently and efficiency than public transports.
However, due to too many people using the personal cars, it is afraid that personal cars produce considerably great amount of carbon dioxide and fine dust. Because Abnormally huge amount of carbon dioxide and fine dust cause atmosphere pollution. (이 문단은 본론으로써의 역할을 전혀 하고 있지 않습니다. 논제가 요구하는 것은 환경 오염에 대한 해결책이므로, 본론에서는 딱 해결책만 다뤄주시면 돼요. 현재 문단의 경우 논제에서 이미 전제가 된 사항인, '자차 사용의 증가가 환경 오염을 증가시킨다.' 에 대해 불필요하게 늘려서 설명하고 있을 뿐입니다.)
Therefore, many people assert that governments should find ways to reduce citizen's private vehicles usage. There are some of the ways. Some of the ways are as follows. First of all, recovering public transports will be helpful to reduce citizen's personal cars usage. If citizens are satisfied with satisfy to public transports, citizens they would not have any reasons to use their own vehicles personal cars. As a consequence, private vehicles usage will decrease naturally. In addition, another way is forcing extra fees to drivers who drive at rush hours. Drivers will be concerned about extra fees, as a result, people could avoid to use using private vehicles at that time.
However, these kind of legal restrictions could cause drivers dissatisfaction.
In conclusion, it is clear that the increase in personal cars that drived a number of people causes several environmental problems. However, if governments and individuals try reduce to using private vehicles and consider nature environment, humanity will resolve the environmental problems. (단순히 노력해야 한다에서 그치는 게 아니라, 그 노력의 양상이 어떤 것인지에 대해, 바로 윗 문단에서 언급된 사항을 들어 요약해주세요.) |