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Of late,
one the of most significant discussions in modern society has been foreign
languages, which people learn. Some argue that the best period to learn foreign
language is in childhood, while others said in say adulthood is a better time. I will examine both
of views and suggest my own opinion.
On the
one hand, a number of people insist that if If adults learn a new language, they have
more chances to get a better job and improve their career in the era of globalization. As more
and more companies has been have opportunities to work with enterprises of all around the world (지워진 부분을 통해 정확히 어떤 의미를 의도하셨는지 몰라서 확답을 드릴 수는 없지만, 아마 제가 바꿔드린 게 맞긴 할 겁니다.) where all
around the work, so that they prefer to employees who can speak foreign languages.,
moreover, require to Moreover, foreign language skills are required when companies are considering considered to promotion.
Furthermore, adults who can speak new languages are likely to gain a global
mind, which need to ability living in multination era, because of their language
ability, they have more chance to communicate with other countries through foreign
books, media. (여기는 문법 체크상 수정해드리긴 했는데, 내용 자체가 바뀌어야 합니다. 이에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
On the
different side of view, there are a range of benefits to learning new languages
as early as possible. Firstly, Children’s children's brain functions are more active than that of adults, thus their brains are always ready to accept anything. Thanks to their physical
benefits, children are able to learn foreign languages with ease and frequent. Many
foreign language books and early study abroad can be a good example. (이게 어떻게 예시가 된다는 것인지 저는 전혀 모르겠네요.) In
addition, endless curiosity is seen as a great contributory factor in improving
their language skill. It follows that they can acquire a great number of new vocabularies
without much efforts compared to adult.
As
described so far, learning a new language in childhood would be have an efficient way
to learn faster and easily. On the other hand, in adulthood also have a
positive effect on many areas. But (가급적이면 문장을 and but so 로 시작하는 것은 피해주세요~) for me, learning Learning new languages as early as
possible is a more reasonable choice to save our time and effort.
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