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The table given shows the England and Wales’ number of employees by sexes and in total with the number of factories in the period of between 1851 and 1901. Generally, we (웬만하면 task 1에서 1인칭을 사용하지 말아주세요~) can observe the constant downward trend of total employees in the given period from 477,100 employees to 61,000 employees. To be specific, these shocking (너무 부자연스럽습니다.) shrinks were observable in both male and female employees. For the number of male employees which was 287,100 on in 1851, it became beame almost one over nine in the year of 1901 with to 31,000 figure. Similarly, the number of female employees were decreased from 190,000 to 30,000 during the same period. In this way, the total number of employees were hugely lowered while the gap between sexes were almost removed. With regard to the number of factories, it has surged to 721 figure for the first three decades. However, after it reached its peak at 721 factories, the number started to decrease until 600 figure on in 1901. To conclude, compared to the shrunk number of employees, the number of factory were almost tripled in England and Wales in the given period. Thus, it refers to the advent of machines (이런 추론 하실 필요 없습니다. 표에 드러난 수치만 가지고 객관적으로 분석해주세요~) in the industry that made factories running with fewer labour forces. (이전에도 말씀드렸지만, Task 1은 결론을 내고자 하는 목적의 글이 아니므로, overview 를 서론 밑에 넣어주세요~)
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