Your Answer ▼
There is a debate over the effectiveness of giving separate education programme for different students. (어떤 면에서 다른 학생들인지를 적어주셔야 합니다. 이 경우 '지능' 이 되겠고요.) Some say that studying together is the best way to make the best result while others say that different ability should (shall 은 ~할 것이다 쪽으로 해석됩니다. ~해야 한다의 should 가 적절하고요.) shall be treated differently. For the opinion of uni-education advocates’ point of view, it is somewhat sensible when considering (이렇게 수정하면 불필요한 1인칭을 사용하지 않아도 됩니다.) we note the importance of the equal right to be educated properly. Students are born with different abilities. Some are gifted, others are need support. Thus, the equal educational chances to every people shall (여기의 경우 shall 은 쓰임새가 맞긴 한데, 이걸 떠나서 애초에 이 단어가 구어에 속하기도 하고, 약간 세익스피어 시대에서 보다 많이 쓰이는 편이라 개인적으로는 사용을 추천드리지 않습니다. 물론 이걸 썼다고 '어? 너 감점' 이러지는 않아요.) fill the gap of natural born abilities by a systemic way. By adopting this uni-education system, a society can make our students and their parents heard the vocie that “regardless of the given ability, our society will compensate for it by securing the equal chance in class rooms” However, some people think differently. They strongly believe that special education is needed for the outstanding students. For their point of view, a different educational programme is not the way of discrimination but the providing the most suitable programmes for every students in school. Under-scored students might fill the gap quickly by careful corrections from teachers while nicely scored students can have the chance to challenge more advanced tasks. By comparing both views above, we can reach to the a conclusion. Institutionally, different students shall attend different class rooms. Forcing intelligent students to attend normal class is just abolishing their possibilities in their developmental period and opposite case is also the torture to the student who should endure the classes that cannot understand at all. Adding to that, by guaranteeing the movement between different level of educational programme according to the regular check up chances, we can also secure the hidden possibilities. By doing this, we can educate our future generation most effectively. (결론에서 내 의견을 조금 더 간추려서 작성해주세요~)
|