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The diagram provided gives information about
the way in which steel roads are produced for the furniture industry.
Overall, there were eleven steps for the
whole manufacturing process. It specifically explains the entire producing
procedures from the beginning stage, the raw material to the last one,
inspection stage.
First of all, iron ore, yellow ore and carton
are mixed in the raw material (저기 보이는 통 같이 생긴 것 자체가 raw material 이 아니라, 아이언 광석 등 세 개가 raw material 입니다.). After collecting them, these materials are (여기에 동사를 하나 넣어주세요! melt 등이 올 수 있습니다.) in
the melting slit with a high temperature of 1300-1500 °C. The next step is the
refinement process in a smelting Smelting cabin (다음 단계는 뭐다~이렇게만 적어서는 안 되고, 그 단계에서 앞선 melting slit 등이 어떤 과정을 거치는지를 적을 수 있어야 합니다. 다른 문장들은 이에 대해 잘 되어있는데 여기만 문제가 있네요.). After that, candescent metal is poured
into ingot pour which is the last step before the casting process.
In the next stage, Ingots ingots are transferred to
a cooling reservoir, where the temperature falls to the range of 60 to 100 °C.
Subsequently, rolling, the heating treatment process is going to be managed. Interestingly,
a surface check is going to be operated automatically as well.
This is almost the final stage of the entire
process, sizing (무엇을 사이징하는지 적어주세요~) with a cutting machine and ID stamping, then we (task 1에서는 1인칭을 쓸 필요가 없습니다.) need to do have
an inspection very carefully. |