Your Answer ▼ Some people believe that teaching professionals influence children more about finding unknown talents(문제에서는 intelligence라고 나오기 때문에 정확하게 써주시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.) and social development. However, there are some people who claim that parents are the person people who mostly influence affect children. In my opinion, I think teachers more influence children, because they spend more time with children.
These days, teachers are the person people who influence the children most. It is commonly known that teaching professionals spend almost half of a day with children. Especially, there are even some parents who lack time spending with their child due to their busy work schedule. For this reason, some children even reported that teachers are more comfortable for them. They claim that it is easier to talk about their social relationships with teachers thatn than parents. Because This is because(둘의 차이 체크해주세요. Because로 문장을 시작해주시면 Since로 문장을 시작해주시는 것과 같이, "Because 원인절, 결과절" 형태의 문장이 나와야 합니다.) teachers spend more time with them and always supervises them. Therefore, it is clear that teachers have more influence on social development of children.
Moreover, as teaching professionals are educators, they are more specialized in teaching children. To describe this in detail, teachers have guilty to(죄책감을 느낀다는 말을 써주시려고 한 건가요? guilty가 여기서 왜 나오는 걸까요? 혹시 responsible을 써주시려고 한 걸까요?) teach specific subjects and their common goal is to make children study. By doing this, teachers have more opportunities to find out children's intelligence and try to make children's academic performances better. On the other hand, when children fight with their friends, teachers are the first person who should handle the situation and give advices to children. Therefore, I strongly agree that teachers are becoming more important person for children.
To sum up, it is undeniable that theachers teachers have responsibilities to teach and communicate with children. Also, teachers spend most of the time with them, and even help them to find their unknown talents. So Therefore, I think teachers more influence children. |