Your Answer ▼ The society we live in is not able to exist without social media anymore. And (문장을 and, so, but 으로 시작하는 것을 피해주세요)Some insist that those media has have such bad effects to each person and society they are in. I believe that it is true, and they provoke a lot of issues all over the world. To begin with, have you read some rumors, or fake news, information through social media and believed it is true before? (물음표로 끝나는 문장은 권장하고 싶지 않습니다. 평문으로 써주시는 것이 좋습니다!) I am sure everyone has. It is one of the major negative influences that so social networking causes. A lot of information is hard to be proved as a fact, still flowing through all the social media, and it leads to make people in the world get confused. On the top of that, people lose their privacy whether they want it or not, even some of their secrets are revealed on it(지칭 대상을 정확하게 써주세요). It is a serious problem, because it can destroy a life of someone. Moreover, so many people just pretend a different person on those platforms. It can be not an issue if that is what they want but pretending someone that is not them can lead to their mental, health, even financial issue eventually. Also, it can be seen as a symptom of worse capitalism since a lot of people overspend the money to show their properties on it. In conclusion, I think social networking sites are having bad effects rather than some good impacts that can lead us reading to read fake news, losing to lose identity, overspending funds and to overspend money. So Therefore, we need to be cautious not to take it(무슨 의미인가요?) when we use(use what?).
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