Your Answer ▼ The first graph illustrates the number of Uk (UK, US 싹 다 대문자입니다. 다른데에도 수정해주세요~) and Us tourists that visited each other's country and the second graph illustrates that the amount of money spent by tourists in Uk and Us. (시점, 즉 연도에 관한 표현도 필요합니다.)
Overall, it is clealy clearly seen that over 4 5 (11년을 포함해서 5년입니다.) years, more (more 가 기존의 위치에 있을 경우, 방문 빈도를 의미하게 됩니다. 그러나 표는 단순히 방문객 수만 다루고 있기 때문에 적절하지 않고요.) Uk tourists have visited to Us more than Us tourists have, also, Uk tourists spent more (여기도 마찬가지입니다. 사소한 어순에 따라 의미가 완전히 달라지고, 이에 따라 점수에 미치는 영향도 꽤 크기 때문에 주의해주세요!) money more than Us tourists.
To begin with, the number of Uk tourists to Us was remained as the higher figure among the 5 remaining the higher rate across 4 years. However, it initially dropped slowly untill 2013 but also increased dramatically after 2013 and peaked at 3.5 millions (다른데에도 s 를 다 빼주시면 됩니다.) visitors in 2015. Moreover, It it also went similarly to the number of Us tourists. Even though there was a fluctuation until 2013, it peaked at about 3.2 millions visitors in 2015.
On the other hand Meanwhile, the total amount of money spent by Uk tourists is higher than that of Us tourists. It is clear that the amount spent by Uk tourists moderately increased is moderately increasing across 4 5 years and peaked at almost 6 billions dollor in 2015. Whereas, the amount spent by Us tourists fluctuated until 2013, however there was an increase was fluctuating until 2013, however there was increasing after then and the figure peaked at 4 billions dollor in 2015.
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