■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. · Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. |
INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM
WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET
Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 |
Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
Topic ▼ You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, Describe the situation Explain your problems and why if it is difficult to work Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer. |
Your Answer ▼ Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing this letter to let you know what that I’m having some problems with my sharemate roommate. There are 3 people staying in this room include including me, one is studying computer programming and the other is majoring hotel management. I’ve talked with them to fix the problems many times but it didn’t work. (+그래서 도움을 요청한다, 까지 나오면 좋을 것 같아요!) One of the difficult things which couldn’t find any way is noise. I’m a kind of sensitive person for to sound, especially in bed time but I couldn’t sleep almost every night due to one guy who was typing keyboard until late night for his assessment. I know he has had to finish what he was doing so I asked him to do it early, not after midnight. Even though he accepted my opinion and he started the task earlier than before, it wasn’t done because lots of errors occurred on his program and it took time to fix those. Because of this situation, I want to change the room if I can. Do you have any room vacancy for 1 person? I need a space to spend my time where it’s calm what I mentioned before. Thank you for reading this letter and I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Lee |
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Total Score: 6.5/9 | Examiner: |
| TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | 7/9 | 7/9 | 6/9 | 6/9 |
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