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These days, around the world, each nations have different laws about education and healthcare. While some people insist that these have to be the responsibility of each people (교육 자체가 ~~의 책임이 되는 게 아니라, 이에 대한 돈을 내는 것이 ~~의 책임이 된다 쪽으로 서술해주셔야 해요.), I personally think that these should be free and funded by the government.
First of all, in the case of education, if there is no intervention of the government, various difficulties could arise be happened. For example, evaluation criteria of personal educational experience is necessary in numerous occasions such as demonstrating abilities and expertise when people get a job or teach others. That is, these need someone who can fairly control like giving qualification and most suitable institute is government. The intervention of the government in providing qualifications and suitable institutes is needed. The government should give Government should have impacts on education by funding on them equally. It would raise the faith of the public and eliminate the gap of properties in education which can be arisen if there is no relation of the (government 가 s 등의 개입 없이 그냥 단독으로 쓰일 때에는 무조건 the 가 붙는다고 생각하시면 편합니다.) government.
Moreover, healthcare has have to be free for everyone for the reasons of importance of every life live. If only someone who are affordable those who can afford the expense of healthcare system can protect their safety life, this is really unfair, cruel, and horrible (점수에 큰 영향이 있는 건 아니지만, 에세이에 어울리는 표현은 아닙니다.) and will significantly separate people by richness and poorness. To prevent this phenomenon, the government should make the law which can provide free health care for everyone and it could be possible by imposing tax to the public according to the state of their assets.
In conclusion, education and healthcare should be free of charge and funded by the government to prevent various problems such as unfair criteria of personal ability and the phenomenon that only rich people could care their health. |