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It is a common belief that governments should spend tax income in providing a variety of books and convenient services in public libraries rather than enhancing public transportations. However, there are more advantages in public transportation improvements. Making a progress by improving the quality of public transportations would bring about a number of positive results toward industries and a country.
To begin with, improving public transportations would lead to enhancements in industries, such as providing a nlot of potential jobs and transfering capitals and commodities more quickly, which makes industries take a competitive advantage in regard to revenue, resources and so on (구어에 가까운 표현이므로, 가급적이면 사용하지 않는 게 좋습니다.). Moreover, enhancing public means of conveyance would also make a progress in a country. Through it, there will be a lot of potential jobs, bringing a lot of advantages into a country in terms of economic.
Secondly, it is a worthwhile in investing tax income toward public transportations than public libraries. Improving public transportations should precede enhancing public libraries. (앞에서 했던 말의 반복입니다.) Once the improvement of transportations complete, people would pay much attention to leisure time which means it would be the best time to spend money on public libraries.
I am of the opinion that it is worth in spending tax income in public transporation improvements. It would bringa lot of positive improvements (그 improvement 에 무엇이 있는지를 작성해주셔야 합니다.) into our lives and country. |