Your Answer ▼ Sedack These days, while some people insist that allowing children to act depending on their own choices in all matters could make them selfish, while others think they need to make decisions in their day life.
Some people think children are immature to choose a moral way on problems, because they are still growing in therms terms of their identity, and personality. If parents let their children to make a decision according to their instinction, they will never realize what they need to care about when they making make a choices until they regret about what they did. That is, this will lead children to gain/have a selfish personality for a long time.
However, others posit that making decisions about matters in childhood is significant for the future life. It is true that there will always be choices in social life such as work place, family activities, and so on. Furthermore, these are much more heavy than the decisions that people made when they were young. That is, they need to make their own choices on tiny matters like food, clothes, and entertainment in their childhood, and gradually make sure what they should avoid to do or pursue. (이 문장 좋습니다.) It will be absolutely helpful and help to prevent regretful decisions in the future.
In conclusion, I totally have a positive opinion about that making choices about matters in childhood is crucial. (결론을 이렇게만 적고 넘기면 정말 곤란합니다. '왜' 그렇게 생각했는지 적어주세요!)
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