Studying
a foreign language is required in some schools. Overall, do you think this is a
good thing or a bad thing? Explain your opinion.
It
has been observed that some students learn a second language in their schools.
I strongly believe that there are various advantages to them. (여기 두 문장은 하나로 이어주셔도 좋습니다.) First and
foremost, they are able to get chances to build a special career and meet opportunities
which is unrivaled like language study abroad through foreign language classes. (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요!) Secondly, these days, because of many fields of developed technologies, people
can contact others, even people even with foreigners using social network services. In
addition, it is true that language is created according to certain history,
culture. Thus, they can also learn the special features of the countries from it. In
conclusion, I opine that learning second language in schools is good think
because it is able to help in having an have improved career in the future, as well as extended friendships
based on cross cultural understanding.
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+참고로, 캐나다 대학교에서 정확히 몇 점을 요구하는지는 모르겠지만 해당 학교에서 아이엘츠 오버롤 6.5를 필요로 한다고 했을 때 DET도 그정도만 요구한다고 보면, task 1부담도 없어진 상황에서 라이팅은 크게 문제가 없을 겁니다. 고로 스피킹 쪽에 최대한 집중해주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)