Agree or disagree with this statement: “New technologies improve lives.”
Explain your reasoning.
It has been observed that new technologies
are have more and more improved because of the development of various sectors. I
strongly agree that it is beneficial to humans (humans 라고 가도 절대 틀린 건 아닌데, 일반적으로는 human beings 가 더 자연스럽긴 합니다.) in several fields like medicine,
education and transportation. Among them, in companies, it is able to be
satisfied of the employers as efficient technologies. (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요!) In detail, robots are cheaper, faster, safer and more accurate compared to humans inexpensive
wage, faster, more safety and high accuracy compared to human. Also, if they
work automatically instead of employees in some parts, people can keep work and
life balance. Secondly, many kinds of GMO food help that not only people obtain
the essential nutrients but also is can play a significant role in battling
malnutrition in developing countries. In conclusion, I believe that new
technologies contribute to the convenient and stable lifestyle of people.
소요 시간:약 14분
총평: human beings의 경우 나중에 캐나다 가셔서도 에세이 쓸 때 요긴하게 활용될 표현이니까 이번 기회에 확실하게 익혀주시면 좋습니다. 다른 부분에서의 큰 문제는 따로 없었고요.
수고하셨습니다 :)