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are several countries where people from diverse countries and cultural
background are living together. In case of Korea, cultural diversity is
increasing nowadays. Some people believe this phenomenon may bring a rapid
development of such countries. In this essay, I will discuss the reason why I
agree to this statement.
First
of all, people with different nationalities or cultural background can benefit
countries’ growth, because people can give various points of view concerning a
single subject. If there is only one thought regarding a subject, people will
not be able to see multiple aspects of it. For example, Korea did not have
cultural diversity, and it only had its traditional style of music in the past.
However, Korea began to open its gate to cultures of other side of the world,
embracing musicians of diverse nationality nationalities to have a concert in Korea and also
participate in producing music in Korea. As a result, Korea now became a
country with pop-music stars all over the globe, including BTS. Without people
who came from abroad and cultures that came with them, the music industry of Korea
must have taken much longer time to develop so far. This indicates that
cultural diversity is essential in the speed of development of countries.
Moreover,
if people from diverse countries or cultures live together, such country can
become more international, compared to other countries. This is an important
factor since people are living in a ‘global village’ these days. The world is
getting closer, and countries are affecting each other, not only economically
but also politically and culturally. Therefore, when a country has people from
many countries, they can easily approach and understand their culture, which in
turn will enable that country to communicate better with other countries. This
would enhance the speed of growth of the country, because it would be
positively connected with different States.
To
conclude, I agree that a country with people from various countries and
cultural background will take the advantage of those people and culture to
develop faster. This is because they will suggest different viewpoints and help
a country be linked with other countries closely.
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